Panel 1 into 2, presents a situation in which information has been left out. I plan to draw more of a connection. This is a prime example of the fragmentation previously mentioned. For instance, I would like the tree line in panel 1 to resemble the treeline in panel 2 more closely. Also, the ground in both of these pieces, is somewhat undefined, expecially within the panel 1, and in panel 2 I accidently put the dog right where the horizon should be. It is this coincidence of counter that I would like to foresee in future work, Drawing beforehand helps to prevent this.
In these panels, the land is to appear devastated and somewhat falling apart, not the case in panel 3.